1. Revisit the PowerPoint on introductions:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B11JiXOw1yx0MHVCd0h0a1R3b2c/edit?usp=sharing
Has the author began immediately with a strong and specific detail, telling the reader something s/he doesn’t already know? Does the author transition to the thesis statement quickly, using the right side up triangle model rather than the inverted triangle model? Are there any generalizations or other unimportant information that can be removed from the introduction?
2. Does the audio have a sense of balance? Does it seem that the author spends too long on any on particular slide or idea and not long enough on others?
3. Estimate the proportion of the audio devoted to direct analysis of the main image. Is it more than 50%? If not, suggest ways the author could revise the presentation to devote a larger portion to analysis.
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